Black Poetry : Burning luv

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da lonely moon dances
    in da darkness of night
    looking upon da burning
    glow wit passionate gleam
    shinning wit unspeakable
    elegance so intense
    a blazzin rapture calls out
    unto her true love
    may my whispers be heard
    yearning for her the amazing
    feverish love seeks deep
    searching for dat moment
    his soul lights up in flames
    in da pools of foreverness
    only now da shadows of
    what is surround dis enternal
    flame burning like a torch
    combined of both loneliness
    and concealed compassion
    dances and darts
    crackles and hisses
    finger flames caress & devour
    like simmering coals of thy soul
    dis burning love awaits da mate
    from da temple of warmth
    unto thy belove i stand to arise
    not in da cloth of garment
    but in the naked bare of skin
    as da guilty tear fall
    land deep in ya dry soul as it boils
    my embracin arm reach out
    lips tightly sealed yet smile
    the heat pours like lava
    my love become treacherous
    slashin in divine truth
    where i lone her essence
    into extreme measures
    to concor my own pleasures
    in da night allure
    rising from da day past
    approaches da gleammin night
    streaks of silver and redish glow
    atops da darkness wit light
    a unique solace
    reality breach
    a taste of da unknown
    my powers unleashed
    a burning desire twinkles
    heavy and deep
    an obsidian curtain
    covers da stillness of night
    da air mass dimples into a
    beackon call
    a spawner spool of shadows
    is beackon in lairs of love
    enfolding in da murky depth
    enraptured by it's talons
    so obscure like a fallen victim
    burning fever my love lash out
    bittersweet whispers of da night
    allure .......i lone for u within
    so i cramp inside my chambers
    under my dot slumber and
    await in da heat of passionate luv.
    :hot: :devil: :hot: :devil: :hot: :devil: :hot:
    :luvv: :luv: :luvv: :luv: :luvv: :luv: :luvv:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep mental play i see. Nice work shoot nice thought.
    as the desires burn the yearning becomes stronger
    i love this!!!!!
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Wow.......Whew......*deep sigh* You know, you need to warn a sista when you're going to flow like this. There's so much in this that was wonderful. Made me have to just....pause. The vivid colorful nuances were simply gorgeous. Flow on, please....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz it was a mental creativity sistah angel
     
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    big thankz watz .... it was all in da creativity and my mind
    i be sho to fore warn ya next time .....smiles
     
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    and it was well place together i enjoyed it...your welcome
    but i feel i should be thank you..:)
     
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    most humbled sistah angel
     
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    *sucking my teeth*

    You know Brother, You just
    make me sick! :uhoh:

    You leave a gurl with
    no other choice but to
    LOVE YOUR FLOW!

    You are just to much!

    Incredible scribe!!!! :luvv: :devil: :devil:
     
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    see dis what y'all do to me after chat .....
    make me wanna ummmmmmmmm!!!!
     
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    LOL! ummm hmmmm!

    You better stay out
    of chat then!

    I take that back, Come on
    in a little more often! LOL

    Keep on bringing it Brother!
     
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