Black Poetry : Burned :hot: :flamet:

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  1. I-khan

    I-khan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The soul so crisp
    by flames of hate
    in every state
    of conciousness

    Now its my turn
    to give you the burn
    so that you can learn
    what was done
    for other peoples fun
    but our demise
    and they still tell lies
    about their ties
    to such acts

    The wind may blow
    the rain my fall
    but our fire keeps burning
    through it all.

    Sun keeps us warm
    earth keeps us cool
    thought many still
    play the fool
    or by the rules
    designed for their control.

    The structure of life
    cannot be contained
    maimed
    changed
    or sustained.

    It takes a life of its own
    and its own destiny is sown
    by itself and no man, woman,child,or beast.

    Death and more death
    for preventable reasons
    change the seasons
    of ones own thought.

    People in power
    really do not shower
    people who need help
    with the wealth they own
    even though it is shown
    on T.V. to be the opposite.

    Perception versus reality
    the ultimate battle
    of real and imaginatory
    may be gory
    for the illusionist to cope
    with losing their glory
    made

    We tried to keep it real
    tried not to steal
    tried to say away from the kill
    and from the white powder out of the
    Nicaraguan hill
    but all that failed.

    WE are back for truth
    and for some revenge
    you feel the burn
    at the same temp
    you inflicted it on others.

    Look who is the sucka
    since Karma is a mutha*****
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yes how i felt this and was right wit ya line by line
    this was str8 up mad tyte indeed speaketh on poet !!
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to l-khan.......

    i want to give this piece 5 :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone:
    and keep them flows coming. hope to continue our session soon.:blowkiss:
     
  4. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes this is hot
    The mental vision
    Of reality and the imagination
    For the revenge to the Karma
    Loving this one poet
     
  5. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blowkiss: Fantastic piece poet!
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to give u 4 thumbs up
    cause this was hot.
     
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    nive peice poet.....
     
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    What goes around comes around, and when the wrong doers get burned, the fire won't be able to be contained. Great piece poet.
     
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