Black Poetry : BURIED IN DA LAND OF FREE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Stilliness of dirt cover da land

    by the deep poverty still at hand
    trouble wasn't planted through thy seeds
    it was raised by an hated enemy

    Problems dewell down in da soul
    where hearts was beating cold
    infested with the worse of mold
    each thorn stuck out bold

    Covered in salty struggle
    by betrayal and bitterness mutha!
    caged in living hell
    from the society pitted system spell

    Mind taken like an daisy
    deep feelings making things crazy
    untouched by yesteryears
    leave's my today in scary fears

    Ancestor's weep and cries
    from da broken unity and lies
    forefather's fallin from it's stand
    from the warth of fellow blackman

    Killing at any cost
    labled of destruction dat brutally slash
    destroying jobs / homes & history past
    because of da mental lash

    Torn from da african roots
    by da process of another's boot
    taken from the soil of motherland
    to this unworthy ameri-kannn!

    People vs people of which we stand
    under supremacy nation klan
    supernatural spiriturality teaching by hand
    lost of truth wasn't the plan

    Buried in bitter soil
    that has my blood on 360 boil
    under the greed of dirty creeds
    and the deed they now breed

    The order of thy holy servant comes
    strong , proud mortal brave son
    once we gain da wisdom to be one
    and da knowledge from selfishness humz

    Slavery still upon our brow
    mentally entraped , broken heart
    labored to an silent exhaust
    to taste freedom lives still lost

    Death upon da birth born into bitter soil
    what have we all become on da grounds
    of unjustice jiberty of this forbidden land
    follow me people let us all now please stand !


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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, my friend--well said as usual--indeed it is bitter soil and you have captured that idea--this is something we don't often think about, but we should--our ancestors dwell there--and we should be a bit more cognizant that are roots are planted in that same soil--Amun-Ra
     
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    yes Ra. we have to open our eyez to see the truth the roots runs deep
    upon da soil time we make a change collectively as an whole......Thankz
     
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    understanding life's maze and the direction
    from the hope in hearts and some affection
    it becomes a deep passion
    when da soul is buried in bitterness
    we have to stand for some happiness
    as i continue to witness it all day by day !
     
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    re:Soil

    Excellent write.
     
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    much thankz sista poetrymama ya words means a lot .
     
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    UNITE A UNITY IN EVERY COMMUNITY TO SAVE A SOUL
    A HEART CAN BE FREE AND GET OUT THIS DEEP POVERTY

    TIME WE STAND MAKE A CHANGE FOR OUR FUTURE AS WE CLAIM
     
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    As we move forward, we cannot forget our past and all the injustices done. Joined together to make a difference our ancestors suffering won't be in vain.
     
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    yes yes yes watz u said a mouth full
     
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    This was deepa than Atlantis
     
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