Black Poetry : Bullet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Luver2B, May 12, 2004.

  1. Luver2B

    Luver2B Active Member MEMBER

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    This craving is annoying
    When it knocks in me un-expecting
    The presence of this deep need
    To have you near like my real seed
    ‘Wish You Were Here’ like Pink Floyd sang
    Close to my touch your scent would hang
    As this pen pours out my feeling
    I see my thoughts crisply building
    I'm tired of missing your ways
    Feed up of not having you always
    With a clear mind and a clean heart
    I'll draw our future as if it's art
    Your absence is killing me
    So this bullet must come with me
    I will never forget you girl
    Never forget the way you twirl
    Sweet you were as a lover
    Now I must go and meet the Maker
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa...

    never understood
    what would make a person
    take their own life for the
    lack of another's...but
    I know that it happens...

    flow on poet...

    this was Intense
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwwwwwwww! awesome drop
     
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