Black Poetry : Buliding a stairway to heaven pt2

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My heart continues to beat wit working veins
    and in my heart i kno i did a lot of bad thangs
    so I kno i must defeat the crimes that i sadly brong upon
    and proudly I'll work my *** off to build a stairway to heaven and undo
    in this way will lead me over the unpredictable sins, and unto heaven
    so God i hope u can hear me repenting
    cus dis life aint gon be spent in the dust
    just trust, I'll build a way and walk up dat way
    I'll use these tools dat God laid down herr 4 me 2 use to build
    wit dat I'll build my steps wit mind, body, and soul
    I'll complete myself as I complete making step after step
    even doh thesez steps seem everlasting
    that I feel like my life is quickly passing
    but I am strong, and I kno it wud be wrong to give up
    knowing dat it aint easy to make it to the top
    but it is easy to drop down unda

    so just like Noah, I'll build a stairway of ark
    wit dat I'll take eight people along
    and which we'll all belong on dis long journey to heaven
    us caressin the ambition of walking all the way
    us holdin hands and hands, that we wont be band 4 life
    so dat, when my bad ways of life start to flood all ova
    I'll have my stairway to walk upon along wit eight others
    safety is were we'll be

    but i kno the devil is always trying to put a soul down
    so i say satan, u can try to hold me wit thesez chains
    that u have locken ever so tightly to my flesh
    u can add more increase weight to my chains
    but i will still remine on my feet
    so u can try to change my direction by crackin
    steps, or by disconnecting a stair step
    but jus kno i alwayz got sumthang up my sleeve
    so u can blow yo deadly wind
    but i will not fall
    so u can caused rocks to roll my way
    cuz i already kno that wit God on my side
    errthang will be fine
    so i jus say, u can bring all bad obstacles my way
    cuz like i said none of yo wayz can persuade me
    no other way

    but than the devil gets into my mind
    i no longer feel fine
    my steps began to turn into forms of huge
    mountains that yet luk numerious, that I feel myself gettin weak
    but a voice begans to speack to me
    telling me to not give up without a fight
    and that i can make it
    than the voice tells me that I am his child or strenght
    so at that point, I am now in realty
    no longer on my knees, but on my feet
    and now i say devil u is real tricky
    but u must got me mistaken
    cuz i will neva be taken by u!
    and work on yo battle fields of pain and suffer
    cuz i kno I'll reather be on the peace lands wit my almighty God
    and not wit a frod
     
  2. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like always cuz I like your flo and this was another tyte drop.
     
  3. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank ya my bratha 4 the luv and appreciation
    but pt3 iz cumin up next...lol

    blackluv and bp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Pt.2 was as deep as pt.1
    those stairways to heaven is built now
    just walk on in wit your head up high
    tyte drop sis.
     
  5. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank ya my bratha rich but i havent made it through dat gate way yet
    so pt3 is cumin up next but im half way derr ....lol
    much luv



    blackluv and bp
     
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