Black Poetry : BUILDING OUR TOMORROW'S VAST

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Feb 3, 2006.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    We as Brothers & Sisters
    the choosen generation
    new dayz , new wayz
    building strong foundation

    Beyond the starz we see
    and the reality our fingers hold
    connecting roots of our tree
    from yesterday's great mold

    sitting in mental ignorance wit fear
    afraid to listen for what we might hear
    true emptiness of awareness reside
    echos of truth like stupidity minds denied

    setting the stage for generational future
    which is mold as there fold by our stand
    who will succeed as we make departure
    mindful decisions dictates our plan

    We building upon the rocks of freedom
    we building to empower of structure
    we building to unify this united way
    we building as people for the people

    Wise choices , agreeing to disagree
    strong voices is heard in our unity
    things of importance we aim to find
    problems & trouble nolonger rise
    cluttering , betrayal , grievance subside

    Analyzing our greatest tool
    often deep and inhabit frustration
    but together we build this foundation
    minds will be filled wit crystal elation

    Upon this rock we divided into millions
    as we seek our mystic realism thrillions
    set our own fate defeating anxieties
    Don't let da candles burn out
    forth it's our history our spirit light as
    building contenders of morrow ............
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man, Rich it's good to read your work again!
    One Love
    Skrybble aka Scrybe
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent Rich, very powerful and uplifiting:hearts4:
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Building

    Rich, This is a true writing and very well written.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful scribe about unity, there's strength in your words.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz skrybble7 welcome back home
    nice feeling ya in da love flowin again

    thank u cursed heart ur very uplifting your self sis.

    thankz poetrymama your words means a lot and warm
    that helps me keep afloat

    tru dat watz thank u sista so much your strength that helps
    me continue
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dam the man has changed the plan
    Im really liking this one here
    Much love on a realism thread for real
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz tantrum the realism of truth has to be said
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice indeed.:) Keep doin yo thang rich and i got something for ya.

    Much Love,

    AM
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Aaliyahmonet i'm trying , whatcha got i want it !!
     
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