Black Poetry : BUILDING A STAIRWAY TO HEAVEN

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm putting together my blocks
    i'm putting away desez glocks
    ima turn back my clock
    till the right hand is on seven
    becuz ima start buildinf a stairway to heaven!

    and me going to hell
    jus aint wat i went to church to spell
    so ima rebell against my evil trails
    cuz dis sistah aint in life to fail
    i'm in life to win ova my bloody sins
    and i aint gonna let my evil ways cum bak like twins
    so ima spin dat arrow untill its pointing to the heavens above

    cus that is whurr im now headed jus like a dove i will spread wings
    and derrs been too many tears sheded to regret it
    so herr i am buliding steps by step
    with Gods help
    i will make it all the way
    no human being can persuad me no otha way
    not even satan can make me stay wit his trickz
    cuz im too smart now to get caught up in the mix
    cuz now my soul is fix!

    so nomore lies cuz i have replies
    cuz now i kno whurr dere is a will dere is a way to heaven
    and i am buildin dat way
    so my bratha and sistahs if u want to join my stair way
    jus cum wit forgiveness,nothing less
    i kno God wud be impress

    and i know it is cuz of God who allows dis
    heart to beat against my chest
    so untill my heart beats stops, i
    will not stop building my stairway to heaven
    and jus kno dat no steps will fall
    jus kno all my stair steps are steady
    jus walk up when u are ready

    part 2 is on da way...lol


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    building brick by brick , step by step
    what's above and beyond let him lead u on
    awaiting pt.2 this was awesome sis...........
     
  3. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank u my bratha rich im glad u liked it
    and pt2 my take sum time...lol

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    it's in ya bring it on out !!
    but i'm awaiting it when u do...
     
  5. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol....o u real funni
    but i kno cuz i hear ya
    and it wont take long 4 me to finish it doh..well i hope



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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flo ga flo on with your bad self.:welldone:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice write!:spinn:
    Inspirational at best!
     
  8. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank ya my sistah nevar ...lol 4 da luv

    stank ya cursed heart, im really glad u liked it



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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome welcome .....
    dear poet...


    beautifull....


    you go...

    giving you that hit on youre shoulder like you Go....
    (you know in a positive way..)


    yeah you are strong ..
    and he is pulling you up....


    you go strong...





    Nice skrybe ...
    i enjoyed it and ..


    you gave me a little positive vibe and power here...



    again thanks for you respond on my poem of the collision..






    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  10. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank ya Auroraflower 4 the visit
    and 4 feelin my flo
    i am happy that i gave u a lil positive vibe and power
    o and u are so very welcum poet


    blackluv and bp

    :blowkiss:
     
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