Black Poetry : bu ti ful ba be aintnoluvlost

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  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aint no love lost
    because you choose to leave
    and not return
    ive searched for you but
    i had to learn that nothing last forever
    ony these words
    you have loved but you didnt want the love back
    so i........
    resurface to find you
    slow these tears down to rewind you
    if youre love was a song
    i would pause it then speed it up
    put the track on repeat
    just because i couldnt get enough
    now im singing all by my self
    composing just whe the love is
    baby youre beautiful because you didnt understand what was giving
    i havent spoke to you in a while but
    the song deep inside keeps me on rhythm
    the thought of you keeps me living
    only to die at your hands
    but its sad to say love wasnt in you plans
    now im forced to stand alone
    reminding me of how it felt before
    you got here
    silent under youre conclusion
    beautiful baby aint no love lost
    now i gotta reach out to myself and only my self
    lover of love hater of wealth
    my soul is rich
    all in the name of love
    but baby youre beautiful
    because you didnt understand what was giving
    baby youre beautiful
    because you tried
    our worlds were two of the same
    ill never speak of this pain
    missing my beautiful sunshine
    you have taken my name
    ill never speak of the rain
    baby i will put it in prose
    sick form this infection a rose
    i am
    i
    will continue
    to
    grow
    taking my hands off
    of whats beautiful
    placing them to the sky
    reaching for you forever
    once
    in love
    you gotta be love
    to see love
    gotta give
    love to feel love
    you have to reach for it like you never had it
    when the truth is found
    all things should balance
    beautiful baby you are aint no love lost
     
  2. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mistaliberator,
    smooth flow from beginning to end characterizing the loss but demonstrating the theme....."aintnoluvlost"

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed well done poet tyte expressional flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know you've lost something, but that something wasn't true love. Still hurts though. Keep the flow going.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write
    enjoyed this one
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome my brotha i havent got my hellos in so :wave:
    this was very emotive
    Spread the poetic love to recieve the poetic love and you will be alright :)
     
  7. THE SWAN

    THE SWAN Member MEMBER

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    UNDERSTOOD

    ALL THINGS COME TO AN END BUT REAL LOVE LAST 4/EVER
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful scribe
    straight from within
    outward
    flow on
    nice indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  9. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHEN IT COMES TO THE LOVE ISSUE IM QUIET
     
  10. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    still feeling this