Black Poetry : bryght and morning star......

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  1. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    slumber deep
    inhaling sleep
    and resting brain cells
    in subconscious plain dwells...

    misty, evening scents diminish
    midnight hues approach their finish
    skyes are lightened
    mental~waves heightened...

    from darkness to full spectrum
    colors viewed by sunlight's reflection
    time to rise
    open your eyes...

    from the dark vastness
    to the world's rashness
    there is one moment when
    all things are certain then...

    when a vision of light
    appears through dark night
    into plain sight
    illuminates bright...

    dawn sky golden turns
    all eyes on heaven learn
    all hearts with passion burn
    for essence of peace yearn...

    serenity in this star
    bright morning star
    nomatter how far
    it still be where you are...

    THE BRYGHT AND MORNING STAR.........

    (dedicated to a kindred soul...U know who you R)
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    twofish, gurl, this is just a lovely piece...yes, indeed. keep on scribin'...i'm watchin'.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ROCKA BYE LOVE IS WHAT U GAVE ME
    I LOVE THE WAY U VIBE INSIDE I REST MY CASE.....
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2FISH....

    sweet lil sister...

    this is as spectacular as the dawning of a new day!

    thank you for sharing it with us... *touched*

    LuvU4Life...
    SunShyne~
     
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    i thank u for this piece
    i dream of the song u sing
    lovin what i hear with keen ear
    la la la de de de lallaby baby!
     
  6. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beloved friends....

    it is like a song...as as a songstress so I SING unto you :)
    (hint: last page of revelations..."i am the bryght and morning star")
    thank you my poetic friends.......
     
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    2Fish,

    I am lovin' it that ya back swimmin' in these poetical streams!!! Excellent piece here!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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