Black Poetry : Brownskin lullaby

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzButter, Oct 5, 2002.

  1. MzButter

    MzButter Member MEMBER

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    If i exscaped the heartbreaken by an inch
    Would i hold you hostage in a cinch ... make you mine
    If i could relive tomorrow would you cherish tooay ..cherish me
    The Love is never ending nor measurable yet you need space
    Could it be it was a rush of things more like a tidal wave
    You are my hearts desire yet there is more .....
    A kiss so sweet i scream your name ..back and forth ..back and forth ...
    I doubt you remember those days
    I will not dwell
    I bond so deep and embeeded in my soul i hold you next to my kin and with that i say you shall always be my first wife ...
    Us we will always be you lit my passion and i have returned ...
    In my time to shine i give you each portion ....
    And we both can rest knowing that there is no final answer
    No definite anything just time to hold us dear
    I give you me
    I give you Love
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "you shall always be my first wife ..."

    hmmm...

    if i could relive today...i would cherish tomorrow
    with you
    cherish you
    cherish the what...whens...wheres
    that we're destined to go...to be
    you and me
    TRUE
    love is not measurable
    so...i'd leave my measuring cup
    on top of the shelf
    and bring mySELF
    to show the difference in
    how things would be
    if i LEFT
    but we won't go there
    coz...the depth of my caring
    tells me
    i don't need that space
    as much as i need
    YOU.

    PLEASE...flow like you do.:)

    1luv
     
  3. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MAN, there's something soulful and deep yet, in a twisted kindda way, calm about this piece, it feels African...for some reason..why do I say so...African men speak like this to the ones they are courting..this piece is very heart warming....

    for real
    khanyi
     
  4. SistaMoon

    SistaMoon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was nice, a very heartwarming piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    simply sweet and very beautifully written ......flow on gurl !!!
     
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