Black Poetry : Brown Sugah.....

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the sky was blue
    his hands touched me....
    my eyes squint against
    the dainty effects of the
    sunlight hiding against
    the curtains.....

    my eyes were glazed over,
    i was distant,
    not fully there
    underneath loose sheets
    that burned my flesh.....

    they were still
    hot as the blazing sun....
    He used to call me Brown Sugah
    because my skin was so
    sweet....

    used to touch me in the
    way that i knew i had
    his soul cluched in my hand
    somewhere
    the wind blew softly against
    my skin.....

    This heaven was different...
    he located the spots that
    made my tempature rise...

    astonished at the way
    his fingers felt, how i
    felt my way through
    myself....

    again....
    i was floating
    and skipping
    and darting
    through a time where
    war didn't matter
    and i could chill
    with a cheetah without the rick
    of getting bitten....

    it was bliss...

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed it was !!!!
    flow on lil sis ya pen is hot
     
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    CreativeExpress Active Member MEMBER

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    Woooo.....

    Felt like I was reading a passing thought that enters my mind when my man's hands feel me through...you hit the nail on the head
     
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    feeling you this poem sis
    very nice
    wonderful
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sis..and bro's....lol glad u feelin this one....
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Girl...Do you need an agent...because I will become un-employed to
    promote your stuff...(jk)...but please read my lips...

    The World is Waiting for your Arrival!
    Get Published...



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    When I grow up...I wanna write, just like you...
     
  7. Justerika

    Justerika Active Member MEMBER

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    from the mouths of babes
    I can't believe your age
    you're what I call a prodigy
    keep up the good work :toast:
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol....sage: okay, how about my people call ur people and we can work somfin out hey sistah, acually i never thought of sellin my peotry, it always seemed like a special private thing that i hold sacred.... but, i appreciate the response

    hey justerika.....i try to do my best, thanks for the love....
    -story
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Word is bond this is :smokin: hurry up and blow up mijita so i can be like THAS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    hehehe :D
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...triniti gurrrlll u so crazay...lol thanks for the love....
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