Quiet Poetry Lounge : Brown Suga

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what has it done to me
    when i know this really can't be
    she not my world be free
    yet it's her all that i see

    (((Brown suga )))

    ever so sweet
    lips of honey
    smile of sunshine
    she is rapidly taken my mind

    How can this be
    when i know she not for me
    I move in the secrecy
    and clash my sins
    yet i lone her deep within

    (((Brown suga)))

    I know the taste
    and felt so move'd
    dancin in her sensual erotic groove
    but at the end i 'm standing alone
    lost yet understand i loose

    Maybe if i sit back and unwined
    look deep into this unblind
    I would see reality and truth
    and accept the black boot
    only to end this drama
    but she one brown suga mom'ma .

    where do i go from here
    giving up what i love dear
    loosing all that i care
    is this really fair
    so i sit and yet i stare
    in this game of truth & dare

    Guess i'll start walking
    stop da talking
    and face up to my suga cup
    that was a stroke of luck
    yep i'm passin da buck
    mind still stuck in this rut

    Not giving up but givin in ....

    :SuN035:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So are you giving in to that brown sugar and deciding to go taste some of that sweetness? Sounds like the sugar is certainly alluring.
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    moments like these...

    moments like these...
    moments like these...
    moments like these...
    get the best of me...

    loved how this all connected, piece by piece.
    Thank you.
    Desert Storm
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well watz let's say i'm just twisted .....lol thankz for da visit

    Desert storm i feel ya cause i'm letting it get the best of me too... lol
    thankz
     
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    Hi Rich
    Gosh It's like I walk this path
    my brother. I'm sure she knows
    Honestly. SHe just have to wake
    up and come out the dream world.
    Into the real one. For real
    Awesome drop my brother.


    Peace~N~Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeah i'm shaking her now trying to awaken the reality bud
    Thankz bluewater
     
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