Black Poetry : Brown Star

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Mar 11, 2012.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brown Star :star:
    I love you girl

    Wherever you are
    I'll gravitate there ~

    Aint no bridge too far
    You're my SUPERSTAR

    Clueless
    Why I'm feeling you

    Weightlessness
    When loving you

    Lost in space
    I cling to you

    Without you
    Life won't do


    Darryl Abdu Omari :spiny:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ luminous :spinstar:
     
  2. MsVeraisblessed

    MsVeraisblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stop, i'm blushing.. Naw, just kidding,.. beautiful piece for couples..
     
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    My Love
    My Heart

    do you have any idea
    what it feels like
    to honestly trust and believe
    in a man's words and love...your words and love

    could you possibly know
    how quickly your love
    entered my heart
    when i saw on the front page
    Brown Star

    and then to read simple and clear
    I love you girl

    there is no way for me to describe
    how your love makes me feel
    even i can't paint its beauty and sincerity with words

    but what i can do is promise you
    to love you with all that i am
    hopefully sharing with you the love of our dreams
    the kind that feels good heals and soothes

    thank you baby for this poem
    I love you.

    (smile)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome script of beauty to love by.....
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A STAR IS BORN!
     
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    I would have to agree. Ya'll r Great!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you.
     
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