Black Poetry : ~~~~BROWN-EYED SPECIAL~~~~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Jun 21, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How many names can you get
    for the color Brown?
    Let's see...
    Amber, Auburn
    bay, beige, tawny, terra-cotta,
    toast, sepia, puce, chestnut etc.
    But the thing is that this afternoon I feel
    for a man better known simply as my,
    Brown-eyed Special.

    Hmmmmmmm
    Brown-eyed Special,
    You put a move on me,
    cause I've only seen you twice...
    **** your my delight!
    And I loose myself in your puce-colored depths,
    swimming in an endless sea of Libratic chocolate.
    The balancer of my two scales,
    you stormed my walls and drained my wells
    you satisfy my curiosity
    every time you speak or you're near to me.

    Brown-eyed Special,
    Burnt Sienna skin the flavor of melted toffee,
    you move deep into my groove and I'm flattened.
    Hmmmmmm you make me feel so good...so alive
    and I fall deeper into your brown colored eyes,
    my Brown-eyed Special.
    Brown-paper bag special,
    a good feast to take to work,
    You look so good to me and make me
    feel so brand new...
    So alive and easy in your mystery.....
    Your class and style
    rush me and I'm left breathless.
    Every time you look at me I’m
    bathed in a sea of chocolate perfection.
    I'm truly diggin you
    my Brown-eyed Special.

    ~Copyright 2004
    "Oriental Mystery" Publishing
    ~*PropheticNsyght
     
  2. MiztikalDreams

    MiztikalDreams Member MEMBER

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    That's Hot

    I'm new here and that's tha kinda flow I been tryin to master for the longest...I gotta give you your props cuz that's a nice piece. :devil:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    romantic sight
    dis was tyte poet of the week .....wow!!!!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i am truly digging this piece
    nice groove on this drop
    flow it poet of the week
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Are you always on fire like this?

    uh....My eyes are brown... :look:

    :D

    kinda like a sienna mix with uh...uh...ummmm

    raw umber, cadium yellow...and burnt sienna...

    yeah...that's what they look like, lol...I'm certain of it...

    Seriously... "Another Masterpiece" ...

    yeah, and those Libras are just absolutely wonderful... :toast:

    I'm relating...keep the ink flowing

    I'm singing in the rain of it...
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    that piece flowed very lovely...
    i can dig da brown eyed special vessel...
    keep pen'n da pieces poet...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So many brown eyed specials to adore, and more, this was so creatively posed, but that is to be expected, poet of the week.
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop poet.... keep the pen alive!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    diggin the flow
    keep it coming Poet of the Week!!!!
     
  10. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All of you are blessings and inspirations. I love each of you and thank you for your love and support. God bless you all.
     
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