Black Poetry : Brother's Keeper

1poetsought

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The Lone-Star State
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There is no fear in Love
It fits us like a glove ~

Unlike
Grim Reaper
My brother's keeper

An enemy so close
Wrecking ball
Black host

Gotcha...
New agenda
Marked return to sender

Monsieur,
Excusez-moi
I take the higher road

Brother,
I'm implying
No more signifying

Ancestors of old
Enlightening the fold

Other than the fighting
Brothers reuniting
PEACE

Darryl Abdu Omari :grouphug:
a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ already!
 
There is no fear in Love
It fits us like a glove ~

Unlike
Grim Reaper
My brother's keeper

An enemy so close
Wrecking ball
Black host

Gotcha...
New agenda
Marked return to sender

Monsieur,
Excusez-moi
I take the higher road

Brother,
I'm implying
No more signifying

Ancestors of old
Enlightening the fold

Other than the fighting
Brothers reuniting
PEACE

Darryl Abdu Omari :grouphug:
a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ already!

Brother Poet 1poetsought,

You know you make a sistah work. Your poems are like brain teasers. By the time I figure them out (and I don't always) I feel all special. (smile)
Anyway...there's a lot going on in this piece. Each stanza reads like a short documentary, all its own. I love that the last lines:

"Other than the fighting
Brothers reuniting
PEACE"

are rich with clarity. They bring the poem home for me. "Brothers reuniting" Yes!! Enjoyed reading.

(smile)
 

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