Black Poetry : Brotherly Advice (for Reena)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Sep 27, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You mean to tell me you really don’t know
    You don’t understand why he treats you like a ho

    Let’s see now

    You’re his personal, sexual receptacle
    Any time he wants
    Under any circumstance
    “Gimme sum pu-ce”
    The boy can’t spell romance

    He’s telling it all
    You know it’s true
    Got your name on the street
    Saying how he does you
    Every boy on the block
    Has detailed visions of how you suck his
    Oh excuse me I hate to be so crass
    But it’s no secret how you give up that ***

    Don’t be surprised
    Wipe those tears from your eyes
    You are so young
    But getting old real fast
    How long are you going to allow this to last?

    It aint like that?
    Yes it’s just like that
    You came to me asking me why
    I love you my sister
    I’m not gonna lie

    He does to you
    What you allow him to do
    Of course he treats you just like a ho
    He’s only after what he can get
    You make it easy
    With your lack of self-respect

    My advice
    Drop this boy
    Unless it’s all cool to you
    Re-evaluate your not yet hopeless situation
    Save what’s left of your tarnished reputation

    BE
    © Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. ladyx

    ladyx Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartbeat

    Tell it like it is. And, in my opinion, advice like this holds so much more weight coming from a true brotha...like you.

    Thank you for this.

    x
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Str8, no chaser

    I hope sista-gurl takes your advice... I know I would! Like the way you came with this, BE. :)

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YEAH !! BE..............

    SHE GOTTA HEAR YA TUNES BLOWIN IN FLOWZ:toast:
     
  5. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uh....

    "P"


    gota few peeps who need to read this one Mr. Beat.

    dannnnnnnnnnnnnnnng!

    SWT
     
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