Black Poetry : Brother Will (Show Your Love)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Nov 22, 2005.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I honor where honor is due
    Poetic soul that moves soul
    Preach brother I need some food for soul
    I need some knowledge
    My brain eager for more
    I need to think
    My mental ready for your
    Intellict and wisdom-Please tell me the meaning of life
    Please tell me why kids kill kids
    Something like the meaning of life
    I need some advise on how to make this move
    The logic that you spill onto a Destee dot room
    We fill the chat rooms
    To listen and clap too
    To vision this black dude
    With opions that you have too
    Have an open mind but thats cool
    All of us are black
    We listen we make do
    Its true the wind moves the land
    The ground moves the sand
    And the will moves the fam

    Much Love Brother Will
    Show Love Poets
    Much Love 2 All My Poets Of Destee
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    your on the righteous path brother
    keeping asking those questions
    the answers will some themselves
    just keeping search for the truth poet

    it will come to you
    trust me on that

    DSS
     
  3. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a -complete- poem. I simply cannot believe all the talent that resides here on Destee. Brother Tantrum, I second the message in your poem.

    Stand tall and open your arms for all the blessings waiting to come your way.

    Our road is a long one.

    Bless.

    ~Ikoro
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man Tantrum u step ya foot deep in this one it was outstanding bruh !
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tantrum::
    Your talent is awesome. I really enjoy
    reading you.


    Much luv
     
  6. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoy reading ur work.
    Flow on poet.
     
  7. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aight its a good piece, but where are you taking me with this. It seems like something is missing like you could add more to it. Hope you don't mind some critizim, but try to break it up in standzas, let people catch up to your words. Like I said this is a dope piece. Keep doing your thing.

    Mannie
     
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