Black Poetry : Brothaman!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  1. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BROTHAMAN.........

    HE CALLS OUT FROM AFAR
    IN PURSUIT OF HIS OWN EASTERN STAR
    HOPING TO DISCOVER PERSONAL FULFILLMENT
    MAMA ALWAYS SAID YOU GOT TO LOOK INSIDE
    BUT HE STILL WENT

    I WEEP
    FOR THE KNOWING OF YOU
    YOU OUTSHINE THE SUN
    FOR NONE IS GREATER THAN YOU

    AS EMOTIONS THREATEN TO OVERCOME
    THE HEART OF I
    YOUR RHYTHMIC CALL MAKES MY TEARS DRY
    EMANATING FROM YOUR OPENING
    JOY RETURNS AND MY SOUL SINGS
    I AND YOU WILL BECOME WE
    HE WHO CALLS IS DESTINY
    WITHOUT FEAR MY MOON SEEKS YOUR SUN
    THE RHYTHM CONTINUES MY HEART JOINS
    THEY BECOME ONE

    WAITING FOR ME IN THE PLACE
    WHERE SORROWS GO
    WE COME TOGETHER AND
    SIMULTANEOUSLY WE LET GO
    OF OLD HURTS AND ANCIENT PAIN
    BLESSINGS UPON US WITH MORE TO GAIN

    YOUR PRIDE RETURNED
    THROUGH YOUR OWN DISCOVERY
    LEAVING YOU FREE
    TO BE LOVED AND LOVE ME

    SO COME WITH ME AND SHARE YOUR LIFE
    THIS DAY IS ETERNITY
    I AM FOREVER YOUR WIFE

    PEACE!

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  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!!

    Very Very Tyte Flo!!
    I dig much!!
    Can't wait for brothaman to come thru!
    Brothaman...
    Where art thou?:D
     
  3. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RASHAD

    THANKS AGAIN FOR THE READ! I HAVE BEEN ENJOYIN SOME OF YOUR WORK TO. LOOK FOR MORE!

    NINI69
     
  4. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight flow NINI69
    this is in response to brothermans poem right?
    post more and i'll keep replyin
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  6. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WILDFLOWER.............

    THNKS FOR CHECKIN ME. I APPRECIATE THE READ.




    ____________________________
    "ETERNAL PEACE"
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    excellent
    simply excellent
     
  8. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there are so many images in each and every line of this piece that touch me in that unspeakable way...

    all I can do is raise my hands

    and give thanks

    thank you for this "peace" today

    a
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin' this piece...quite nyce, dear poetess.
     
  10. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    SHAZ, ALYCE AND LISTERSCRIBIN'

    THANK YOU FOR BLESSING ME WITH THE READ.

    APPRECIATION IS INSPIRATION.

    PEACE!!!!!!!!!!!!