Black Poetry : Brotha It Ain’t Happening

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  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see you strolling down the avenue
    You be watching the honey’s while
    They watching you looking to see if
    I see you

    Smooth like a velvet rub
    You go straight for the sugar
    Cause you a pimping thug!

    I see you with your timberland
    Boots, Sean (Puffy) jacket with a little
    Bling bling, but baby you still
    Don’t do nothing for me, not a thing

    You trip cause I don’t pay you know
    Mine! Baby I can’t waste my time
    This ain’t comic view and I ain’t
    A gooney goo goo you ain’t got the
    Rap and I don’t have the time to chat

    You see my mind is prone to bigger
    Things got love in my pocket and
    A heart that sings, I got the pen that
    Can make a smooth line, I got my
    Dreams and goals can’t be wasting
    My time

    Besides that fact that you have nothing
    To offer me that isn’t outdated, illegal or
    Whack, I ain’t going out like that.
    You see, I have too much to loose for just
    A one night stand, because you are not in
    My plans, my brotha I got a man.

    I can’t take the chance on losing what is
    Real and makes me feel like that Queen
    That I am, you see you wouldn’t understand
    Cause you have not grown enough yet to be
    That type of man

    So go ahead my man and do your thing with yo
    Bling bling, Cause I ain’t no round the way girl
    I am a Queen

    AqueenPassing
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  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sho nuff. sho nuff ya right!!!
    Let da truth be told!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STEP UP

    Step off... Diva's don't play!
     
  4. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Queen,

    You know I am loving this!! Great flow!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now dat tell it like it is ...........tyte
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl u put it down ...No, round the way girl writing flows like this!
     
  7. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    word...now that's what
    i'm trying to hear
    i luv this scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
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