Black Poetry : brooke

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  1. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BROOKE

    as i sit on this computer hoping to see your name pop up
    my breath catches in my throat and my heart seems to lock up
    Brooke.... you're more like an OCEAN of sexiness and sweetness
    with more money in my pocket and you beside me, it would be my completeness
    i don’t know what's come over me since we first begin to talk
    i want to see your silly *** so bad, i feel like i could walk!!
    when we chat, i feel kinda good, like everythings going to be alright
    you're one of the only females i know that i could talk to every night...
    you have the pull of a magnet, and i cant help but be attracted
    you have a beauty that’s on the inside AND physical, and a silliness that cant be subtracted
    you make me laugh and make me think,
    sometimes too much thinking, and i wanna drink...
    but im already intoxicated by your style
    to kiss your sexy lips, i would brave the long miles
    and i respect the strength, that i know you have
    when i hear your pain about things in the past...
    to make it through all the **** you have...
    and still be able to smile and laugh?
    i wish i could erase that **** from your memory, cuz you don’t deserve it
    and replace it with beautiful memories that would deserve preserving
    you are like the brightest star in a star filled sky
    i know i really like you, but don’t know why...
    i cant explain the quick beating of my heart,
    or the sadness that we are so far apart
    i just know that you are quite special to me already
    i want a friendship with you that’s long, strong, and steady
    i’m confused cuz we friends and can be no more,
    and i feel like im kicking opportunity right out the door...
    but oh well, enough of this, you are my cute lil friend
    and nothing i have said to you is exaggerated or pretend. the end ha



    Derrick H.
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful Derrick a real gem :)

    :heart: peace and blessings :heart:
     
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    What beautiful words from a beautiful soul!

    Only a beautiful soul could produce such beautiful words...never say never...dare to dream...dreams are the stuff that Poems are made from! hahahaha Love da lova's whether they be cyber or someotha!
    Blessings on ya house!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loved how ya work poet !
    dis here opens up doors wit such beauty
    Thanks 4 sharing
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    real good read

    flowed real well

    keep it up
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaay MidnightsSon :wave:

    Welcome Home !!! :jumping:

    So good to read you ... how are you ... Happy New Year !!!

    This peace is so sweet ... so beautiful ... so eloquent ...

    had me thinking my name is BROOKE ... Great Work ... :toast:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Midnightson --- trust me dude, I have BEEN THERE !!

    My "Brooke" has had a few different names.

    This was real and heartfelt - let no one hate on the
    chemistry two folks can have online or wherever ,,,
    it all still happens for a reason.

    I was with you on this one.