Black Poetry : Bronze in Tan in Hand on a Pan

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bronze inTan in Hand on a Pan

    Holding Hands on beaches of Sand
    No trouble or plans just listening live,
    To a Mexican Band
    Let’s get married tonight from Woman to Man

    And

    Maybe in the future we could expand
    With cute little babies on this earthy Land
    Just say, “Love” a one-word command
    And we shall bring forth life on demand

    Light a candle made from Roman
    Untwist the yarn around your hips And
    Let your entire body frame get tanned
    The browner the bronze is what I Understand

    Knowing my aphrodisiac is bronzer on a pan
    I’ll cook it and eat it on a dish, so tell me if I can

    God ****
     
  2. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    god******
    love your absoluteness of rhyme..
    your fun and humour..
    keep on flowing
    and going
    and sowing
    and rowing
    on
     
  3. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this sense of humor in this piece. Nice flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    brutha u still bring it lyrically tyte !
    wit great smooth flow
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very creative i likes the rhyme thang too
    tight drop
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was both fun and sweet all wrapped up in rhyme. Flow on poet.
     
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