Black Poetry : BROKEN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mistaliberator, Jul 6, 2004.

  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BROKEN BODIES
    ON BROKEN PAVEMENTS
    CANT ERASE THE CHALK LINES

    LOST

    COULDNT FIND THEIR WAY
    LIKE THE MASSES
    GUNS SPRAY
    ONLY
    FOR MY REALEST COMPANIONS TO BE TAKEN AWAY
    ALL IN THE SAME DAY
    WE CRY
    MEMORIES BECOMES THE FACE OF A THOUSAND KIDS
    NEVER TRYING TO CHANGE THIS BROKEN FUTURE
    WE LIE
    LOOKING FOR DIAMONDS IN A BLACKENED SKY
    ACCEPT WHATS GIVING
    STOP CHASING TRUE DREAMS
    AND
    NEVER ASK WHY

    BROKEN

    THIS TIME
    FAKE DESIRES
    CHASE MY TRUE DESIRES TO HELL
    BUT YALL CANT TELL
    I SEE SPEAK AND LIVE WHAT THEY DECLINE TO FEEL
    BROKEN POETRY BUT ITS WRAPPED TIGHT IN GODS GREAT WILL

    BROKEN DREAMS
    ON BURNT COURTS
    SCREAM THE UNWANTED STORIES
    OF CHALLANGING
    THIS WET ENVIORNMENT
    ALL THINGS MUST TRY TO STAY DRY
    LITTLE BABIES ROLL BLUNTS
    BABIES RAISING BABIES

    YALL GET LIFTED BEYOND BELIEF
    OPEN MINDS ON A CLOSED STREET

    BROKEN

    IT
    AINT JUST PARADISE IN THESE HEAVENS
    ONLY TIME FOR CHANGE

    BROKEN BOYS
    FROM BROKEN HOMES
    HANG ON BROKEN BLOCKS
    WHAT U SEE IS NOT WHAT U GET
    GETTING CHASED BY BROKEN COPS
    SWORE INTO PROTECT U
    BREAKING BONES IN THE NAME OF JUSTICE
    GOD KNOWS
    BECAUSE GOD WATCHES
    US GET THROWN IN A BROKEN SYSTEM

    LEFT TO ENDURE
    BEING HELD IN HIS PALM
    BROKEN LOVE
    FOR

    A BROKEN PROMISE

    THATS THE BREAK DOWN
    OF A PRODUCTION

    A BROKEN MOMMA
    DREAMS OF BROKEN
    THOUGHTS OF DISMISSALS
    FOR LOVE
    LONG FORGOTTEN
    BITTER
    ROTTEN
    LOST
    BABY YOU GOTTA LOVE YOUR SELF
    CANT NO MAN LOVE YOU LIKE YOU LOVE YOU
    AND WHEN
    ITS JUST YOU
    YOU UNDERSTAND

    FELLING THE RAIN
    JUST MAY BE JUST
    A LITTLE TO COMFORTABLE
    WHENT ITS PURPOSE IS UNKNOWN

    CLEANSING MY SOUL
    TO DAY I RENAME
    THE PAIN REFRESHING
    GOD SMILES FROM THE INSIDE OF A COMPLETED BLESSING

    BROKEN BUT NOT HARMED

    SAFELY YOURS
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So many things in life can break us, you painted a troubling but true scene here. But the way you ended this, sounds as though you are down, but not out. Keep the flows coming.
     
  3. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mistaliberator

    Cool you wrote in all caps
    for that I give you dapz
    I think that means something good
    If not I'm being misunderstood
    The story was impressive
    and also very expressive
     
  4. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice...nice...wonderful....tight......flow on:wink:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    LIKE DA FLOW OF DIS MAD TYTE DROP
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reality is a hard pill to swallow sometimes...you delivered this quite well. thanks for bringing this to us.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is raw and beautiful and true. I love that you brought this to our table, mistaliberator. Peace to you.
     
  8. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU

    thankyou for the constant love
     
  9. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    throw back tuesdays
     
  10. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hear you...




    beautifull.......



    we break than god seeks trough our hearts...

    for the real cry,s and sorrow..and confssions..

    and than he lifed us up..






    now i dont know who you are ...
    only god knows the hearts and the treu faces behind the poets names..

    and i say this because you ones responded on a poem of mine....
    than later you appologised for sumthing....
    wich made me later think that you were some who ...yes also had broken my trust......

    but you could be anyone..(cause some people here think i know who who is...and if i go and search i get more confused than things already were)
    and than ofcourse if this person wants to tell me sumthing ..he can always just tell it to me..


    but what i wanted to say ...


    is that i feel you...

    and i feel youre poetry...



    keep writting poet...


    and whatever you go trough ....
    i pray for you...

    and i got youre back..(and i realy mean this for all the other brothers and sisters to some dont believe it but if there is anything ...let me know ok....the only thing is is that i have no private messenger now i have to repay my member ship again of libertylady)







    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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