Black Poetry : BROKEN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mistaliberator, Jul 6, 2004.

  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BROKEN BODIES
    ON BROKEN PAVEMENS
    CANT ERASE THE CHALK LINES
    LOST
    COULDNT FIND THEIR WAY
    LIKE THE MASSES
    GUNS SPRAY
    ONLY FOR MY REALEST COMPANIONS TO BE TAKEN AWAY
    ALL IN THE SAME DAY
    WE CRY
    MEMORIES BECOMES THE FACE OF A THOUSAND KIDS
    NEVER TRYING TO CHANGE THIS BROKEN FUTURE
    WE LIE
    LOOKING FOR DIAMONDS IN A BLACKENED SKY
    ACCEPT WHATS GIVING
    STOP CHASING TRUE DREAMS
    AND
    NEVER ASK WHY

    BROKEN

    THIS TIME
    FAKE DESIRES
    CHASE MY TRUE DESIRES TO HELL
    BUT YALL CANT TELL
    I SEE SPEAK AND LIVE WHAT THEY DECLINE TO FEEL
    BROKEN POETRY BUT ITS WRAPPED TIGHT IN GODS GREAT WILL

    BROKEN DREAMS
    ON BURNT COURTS
    SCREAM THE UNWANTED STORIES
    OF CHALLANGING
    THIS WET ENVIORNMENT
    ALL THINGS MUST TRY TO STAY DRY
    LITTLE BABIES ROLL BLUNTS
    BABIES RAISING BABIES

    YALL GET LIFTED BEYOND BELIEF
    OPEN MINDS ON A CLOSED STREET

    BROKEN

    IT
    AINT JUST PARADISE IN THESE HEAVENS
    ONLY TIME FOR CHANGE

    BROKEN BOYS
    FROM BROKEN HOMES
    HANG ON BROKEN BLOCKS
    WHAT U SEE IS NOT WHAT U GET
    GETTING CHASED BY BROKEN COPS
    SWORE INTO PROTECT U
    BREAKING BONES IN THE NAME OF JUSTICE
    GOD KNOWS
    BECAUSE GOD WATCHES
    US GET THROWN IN A BROKEN SYSTEM

    LEFT TO ENDURE
    BEING HELD IN HIS PALM
    BROKEN LOVE
    FOR

    A BROKEN PROMISE

    THATS THE BREAK DOWN
    OF A PRODUCTION

    A BROKEN MOMMA
    DREAMS OF BROKEN
    THOUGHTS OF DISMISSALS
    FOR LOVE
    LONG FORGOTTEN
    BITTER
    ROTTEN
    LOST
    BABY YOU GOTTA LOVE YOUR SELF
    CANT NO MAN LOVE YOU LIKE YOU LOVE YOU
    AND WHEN
    ITS JUST YOU
    YOU UNDERSTAND

    FELLING THE RAIN
    JUST MAY BE JUST
    A LITTLE TO COMFORTABLE
    WHENT ITS PURPOSE IS UNKNOWN

    CLEANSING MY SOUL
    TO DAY I RENAME
    THE PAIN REFRESHING
    GOD SMILES FROM THE INSIDE OF A COMPLETED BLESSING

    BROKEN BUT NOT HARMED

    SAFELY YOURS
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really likewd this flow here, yes things are so broken theese days but we all should "do what we can do when we can do it" to try to fix it all.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    i hear ya....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done tyte drop lovin it !
     
  5. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this piece grabbed me by my heart strings and wouldn't let go...
    excellent descriptive job that hit home and hard...
    keep writing, we need it
     
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