Black Poetry : BROKEN

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  1. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Because of a mis-understanding, we choose to
    Retreat from our relationship.
    Our eyes red from tears, lips trembling and our
    Knees shaking. All is lost. To us, it's the
    End of the world. There are really
    No words to describe the loss.... In our minds, bodies, souls and

    Hearts, there is a deep void. The ending words ring in our
    Ears. We are sharing a feeling...
    A virgin feeling.....Is it
    Reality or juss an allusion?
    Thats the question. The answer is known by both, and yet not revealed
    End. End. End.... It's the end, and we are both
    DEEPLY BROKEN HEARTED
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear Broken

    Sorry for the sense of loss that you have expressed so well. :wink:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was expressed very well indeed....sorry for this hurt...
    much love..:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed da pain u share is felt within my heart
    blessin be of u for inner healing
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :( dang sista I feel your pain...hope you find healing :grouphug:
     
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    much love to you:grouphug:
    feeling you on this scribe
    Peace
     
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