Black Poetry : Broken

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PrincessFlowz, Jun 18, 2003.

  1. PrincessFlowz

    PrincessFlowz Active Member MEMBER

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    A borken hearted little gurl
    never recovers from pain
    goes on living life
    laughing as tears fall
    a broken hearted hearted little girl
    a broken hearted poem
    a broken girl
    broken tears
    broken promises
    broken relationships
    shiviring little heart
    of a broken girl
    broken mindset
    broken morals
    broken virginity
    this poem cries
    this poem hurts
    bleeds and
    gets pissed off
    this poem is that little heart of
    a broken girl
    this poem is...
    me.
     
  2. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Princess..that is what your truly are. So hold your head up and let the light shine. Life gets better with Time.
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that is so tru Rico it'll get better until then I'm here for you nice poem very beautifully written
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and unto da little gurls heart
    is a light of comfort scribe
    what hurts will soon be cured
    the pain & broken heart will mend
    welcome from deep within
    ya vision of dis poem
    is the grace i vision on ya face
    no more hurt
    no more pain
    no more madness
    as i bless ya name
    from above in flyte
    lovin dis flow ummm! ya write
    keep the ink droppin'
     
  5. PrincessFlowz

    PrincessFlowz Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you everybody.....I love you guys!!!! LOL You guys make me feel so much better about myself...I've got more poems coming..they're all stashed away.Keep looking for them:)
     
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    Hi Princess, :wave:

    This is a wonderfully written piece. In time your life will be filled with sunshine. :toast:

    I'm looking forward to those poems!!

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Princess,
    That you are! I am so feeling this one and I know the pain behind the words, I often write about the closet wounds of children, because it was also my life at one time.... Much love to you I admire your strength and courage to express what your heart holds and sometimes what others do not want to talk about.....

    Blessings
    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
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