Black Poetry : Broken Vagina........

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, Feb 17, 2008.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If these walls could talk
    Oh if these walls could talk........

    It would tell a story of lovers come and gone

    Lovers that has entered a place of pleasure

    and pain

    Pain because once ago theives took what was rightfully not theirs

    Pleasure of those who had a lot to give

    Oh if these walls could talk they would say

    Some were good and some were bad

    Some just need to go back in hiding forever

    But she moves on

    Many promising that they would never leave her

    Wouldn't forsake her

    But would give her the world if her heart desire

    Giving them what God has deemed as a precious gift

    Trusting Lucifer with his forked tongue

    Flickering in and out

    In and out

    Till I could no longer recognize whom I was dealing with

    Before it was all over there my walls are

    Beaten and abused by those whom I thought were real men

    To look over to see the imprints of bodies that once lay there

    One hit of me, and that was all she wrote

    Oh the words they spoke

    It's good
    I can't leave you alone
    Don't ever hurt me girl
    Mmmmmmmmmm let me go deeper

    And my walls succumb to their demands

    Down to the deceptive

    hands
    lips
    fingers

    whatever it took to get me there

    A rush, a fix

    Confusing sex with love is a dangerous mix

    Because someone is bound to be hurt

    I'm not ashamed to say if these walls could talk

    Because one day a man appeared

    Just like the others before blew my mind

    Left me breathe less

    Left me speechless

    Left me wanting more

    As I look at his eyes of content

    I dismiss this as an needed encounter

    But this encounter wasn't like the others

    He wanted to stay with me

    Love me

    He didn't care of the others before

    To those who explored

    He wanted to love me and only me

    Like a doctor he began to make me feel good

    Not just sexually, but spiritually, physically, and mentally

    Help me to realize that he is here to stay

    Gave me confidence and even sprinkled some hope on me

    Oh how I am in heaven with this man

    He took my broken vagina and placed within a man

    who doesn't use it for his sicken pleasure

    But treats it like a real man should

    If these walls could talk
    Oh if these walls could talk
    They would say

    Well you know I have to leave you hanging my friends
    I'll return once I am Mrs. on July 19

    To be continued..............
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So much I'd like to respond to within this piece. I knew someone whose body was invaded without her permission, and no one has the right to do that, no one. And blessed you are to have found a real man who loves you for you. You're also blessed for being woman enough to recognize you have a real man. Congratulations!
     
  3. PositiveMindset

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    U're walls HAVE spoken, & they told a story well known by many but unable 2 overstand the severity of it all. Job very well done & very many congrats 2 U.
     
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    Hello Nevar:
    I must say that this is a very
    impressive write.


    Much Luv
     
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    First in foremost congrats on your upcoming nuptials and last but not least excellent drop sis
     
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    phynxofkemet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    congratz

    Congratulations on finding real love with a real man!
    I respect your truthfulness and courage in this piece,
    our sexuality is part of our power but sometimes also
    sometimes a part of our pain and you've expressed both beautifully.
     
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    Congrats!

    Congrats, Sis!

    I AM FEELING U, I AM FEELING U!

    oh, if these walls could talk! what would they say?

    beautiful flow.

    Much love.

    Heart to Heart

    Desert Storm
     
  8. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to all that have showed their love to me.....
     
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    If these walls could really talk they would tell you that you are not alone in your pain! Thank you for your transparency and for just putting it down like only you can!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i'm so happy for you

    good things come to those who have patience

    but i wouldn't say anything is broken

    i mean brick building blocks do have a rough surface

    but still the building stands

    peace poet
     
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