Black Poetry : Broken Vagina part two...Losing you.....

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Broken Vagina

    Broken Vagina

    Broken Vagina


    No longer broken but is open to you

    I love you, my love

    Our love has been one test after another

    Many storms has passed

    I feel as if Katrina has been thru our life

    Possessions been taken away

    Stability has been taken away

    Our will to love one another has been taken away

    We both want marriage, but marriage is on hold

    Because of what has been brought to light

    Your light is dim while mine is bright

    We no longer communicate

    The world has corrupted you, and has my Fiance in places he shouldn't

    I'm not saying you loving another

    Your loving the world so much that your family is suffering

    Because the man that has mended my Broken Vagina
    is spiritually,

    physically out of place

    I've stood for you when noone else did

    I've believed in you when noone else did

    and now your actions are hurting our family

    Pray to God for wisdom, for discernment asking him to continue to

    Order my steps

    Tell me love why must I leave you in order for you
    to realize what you will be missing

    Tell me why

    Your at home, your love is for me, and the kids

    I feel some other attraction is leading you
    to feel retracted from us

    How could you come in and make me feel
    like I am on top of the world

    Just so later on for me to be
    singing Trina song

    "Here we go, here we go again"

    Selfishness, lies, deceit
    is all for the past week I have been given

    Driven

    To the point
    where I your spritual soon to be wife must leave you behind

    So that you my love will find your way back to us

    It's killing you that we must live apart

    Be apart

    I can't go on another day
    the wrath of God is too much for me to bare anymore

    The path your choosing is not for me love or our family

    Like the Prodigal Son you must find your way

    Hopefully soon you will realize the world wants to see you fail

    Whereas I don't

    I love you, the kids love you

    and that is why

    If you love something so much you must let it go

    I don't want to
    don't have to
    But this love I feel for you
    I have too

    I would have never thought
    that me your Eve
    would have to decieve
    you
    just so that you could straightened up

    I need a Soldier in our lives

    and the flame you carry for us had died

    died upon our Broken home

    I can't leave you alone
    as I will try to continue on without you

    Without you
    Beside you
    Inside me
    Feeling free

    As I try to pick up the pieces you have left unfinished


    to be continued...........
     
  2. watzinaname

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    This saddened me as I could feel your heavy heart. It's so difficult to leave someone you love so that they will straighten up, but sometimes it is necessary. Such an emotive piece nevar, I was not expecting this. There's no telling what the future holds, keep the faith, and I wish you the best.
     
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    Can relate

    Sister, I can relate to this and empathize with your pain. Your strength is coming through the words and I am assured you can and will rise above the situation. Keep your faith, a divine mind can straighten anyone up who has gone astray, but in the meantime keep yourself in a good place!

    Sending you prayers and good thoughts
     
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    Pain is the threshold to a brighter tomorrow and tomorrow is the dawning of a new you so never allow the pain to lead you away from tomorrow because even your tomorrow need you to strive past today.
     
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    feeling the depth of ya heart's pain that will mend to a bigger tomorrow
    filled in joy keep ya head up
     
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    thank you fam for showing this Ga peach some love!
     
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    guess who loves you more...

    only you know this, nubian princess. i don't even know you and Judging from your wize words, you are very deserving of a Good Man, a God-fearing, Strong-minded and hard-working heaven sent Angel to wed you and ascend perfectly into the universe leaving All behind. All i heard was Raheem Devaughn's song in my head while reading yet another inspiring write! thank your precious spirit for this.

    p.s I am a reciprocal of your heart in male form.
     
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    The sequel was a blockbuster! but please don't let Trina star in it cause you're the strongest chick and we got enough bad chicks already. Maybe he needs time away to see his weakness. Then he'll realize his strength lies with you. Another real hit no doubt & nevar stop flowin!
     
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    thank you fam for the love shown to me on this piece!
     
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    This is Deep

    Reading this brought back some painful memories with my ex-wife. Sistah if these words cant reach his heart I dont think nuttin will.
    Wishing you the best in this situation.
     
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