Black Poetry : Broken Promises

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  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep your mouth shut
    Or there’s no choice
    but to mess you up
    Do you hear my voice?
    So what’s up?
    You know there are secrets
    Especially some no one needs to know
    Just as easily though
    Some how now everyone knows
    And that just goes to show
    No one not even your best friend
    Can keep that secret
    Hidden, that no one should know
    Now I’m in regret
    I can’t seem to let it go?
    I trusted you and you swore
    Doesn’t that mean anything anymore
    To me that’s pretty low
    And that’s the truth that I know
    But now I just don’t care anymore
    Because you took my heart and tore
    The light that once shined
    And the love in which we were bonded
    Is floating at the bottom of the pond
    The friend I once knew seems to be gone
    And now I know what it’s like to be alone.

    One_Love
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can see that this betrayal of
    Your confidence has left a festering wound
    And as one who has himself forgotten the difference
    Between a secrete and a matter of fact
    I would like to apologize for that.
    but for you you must
    (let it go)
     
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    shaz

    Very true! Everyone I'm sure has faulted at one time and that's why we forgive people but that doesn't change the fact of the scar they left in my life. Everything that happens changes our lives and makes us who we are today. Thank you for opinion. It's true. Much respect to you.

    One_Love
     
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