Black Poetry : Broken Man

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hit it again ~
    To circumcise my brain
    Knowing what's going on sure is lame
    Ever since JESUS left you been saying
    Man my stuff is broken GOD ain't playing

    Broken man, our summation
    Working toward liberation
    Loving with dedication
    Blessings to your
    Location

    How could there ever be separation
    Given the need for man's salvation
    Better you heed occupation

    Baby,
    You're pure soul, o.k.


    Darryl Abdu Omari :bowdown:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ obedience
     
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    if i knew the magnitude of this piece, i would sing its praise. unfortunately, your style of writing makes it hard for me to follow along, sometimes.:( and i want to understand...so, what am i missing? or, is that the attraction?

    i know i'm slow, sometimes. don't laugh, my brutha.:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A broken man carriage change everything
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome back.

    We can't miss what we never had.
     
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    Dear Brother Poet 1poetsought,

    Collectively...I don't understand a word of this, but each individual line is special and powerful. I love your unique style and inability and/or unwillingness to conform.

    (smile)
     
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    Broken man don't you want to play
    Let your playmates hear
    What you have to say ~

    THANKS
     
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    Dear Brother Poet 1poetsought,

    Oh. Thank you for the assist. Now, collectively...every word makes perfect sense.

    (smile)
     
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