Black Poetry : Broken Man

[1poetsought]

Hit it again ~
To circumcise my brain
Knowing what's going on sure is lame
Ever since JESUS left you been saying
Man my stuff is broken GOD ain't playing

Broken man, our summation
Working toward liberation
Loving with dedication
Blessings to your
Location

How could there ever be separation
Given the need for man's salvation
Better you heed occupation

Baby,
You're pure soul, o.k.


Darryl Abdu Omari
a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ obedience

 

[baller]

if i knew the magnitude of this piece, i would sing its praise. unfortunately, your style of writing makes it hard for me to follow along, sometimes. and i want to understand...so, what am i missing? or, is that the attraction?

i know i'm slow, sometimes. don't laugh, my brutha.

 

[$$RICH$$]

A broken man carriage change everything

 

[1poetsought]

Welcome back.

We can't miss what we never had.

 

[TotalView]

Hit it again ~
To circumcise my brain
Knowing what's going on sure is lame
Ever since JESUS left you been saying
Man my stuff is broken GOD ain't playing

Broken man, our summation
Working toward liberation
Loving with dedication
Blessings to your
Location

How could there ever be separation
Given the need for man's salvation
Better you heed occupation

Baby,
You're pure soul, o.k.


Darryl Abdu Omari
a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ obedience

Dear Brother Poet 1poetsought,

Collectively...I don't understand a word of this, but each individual line is special and powerful. I love your unique style and inability and/or unwillingness to conform.

(smile)