Black Poetry : Broken Home

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  1. BioRhythm

    BioRhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Broken Home

    Dedicated to my lost love… Ashley Ward

    I watch as the sun rises,
    I watch as the sun sets,
    my mind plagued by your eyes,
    the most beautiful eyes I've ever met.
    ~
    I watch as the days slowly past,
    as my life slowly sets.
    I look back on my life
    and all that I regret.
    My Love, my Pain:
    my Anger, my Shame.
    All these things not eased,
    but by time grieved.
    ~
    I analyze my actions;
    I hear my words,
    remembering my mistakes
    my life downward spirals,
    My heart aches.
    So I mourn.
    ~
    For my Love is gone...
    and Her words no longer...
    Her laugh no longer...
    Her voice I no longer hear...
    ~
    Brought back to present pain
    I mourn,
    knowing her love I shall never see,
    as the fault lies within me.
    ~
    I watch as the wind blows,
    I watch as our child grows.
    Every idle moment renewing pain,
    as my thoughts lay on our love.
    ~
    As our love's beginning haunts me,
    I realize Her love’s gone
    and I'm without a home,
    among reminiscings of her silken skin,
    Of her startling eyes,
    Of her passionate kisses,
    I watch us die.
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    So as I watch the petals fall,
    and as I watch the seasons change,
    my life contains one hope,
    along with one joy-
    my dream: my desire,
    the return of ecstasy
    with my love's return.

    By amar is life

    © 2005 amar is life (All rights reserved)
     
  2. Sodwn2earth

    Sodwn2earth Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ouch

    The pain of losing your love...... a feeling I have yet to expirence. But from this write, I'm sure it's something I want to steer clear of. Heart-wrenchingly beautiful.....
     
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    This is a heartfelt poem of lost love. Stay Strong. :weights:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deeply felt on the note of love that's gone
    yet with faith it shell return into ya heart
    keep ya head up !
     
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    I felt every word to love and lost is a very hard thing to deal with this was a very good write....Angel
     
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    As beautifully, expressively written as this was, it so aptly described that pulverizing pain. We eventually learn how to manage the pain. This was a great write poet.
     
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    I can only measure such pain by your mournful cry, and it has touched my heart.
     
  8. BioRhythm

    BioRhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all... I appreciate the support... writing is my life and is the embodiment of my spirit.. i only hope to keep touching hearts and minds with the tales of my life and beliefs...
     
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    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep and heartfelt.
     
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    been there. nice drop.
     
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