Black Poetry : Broken Hearted

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Oct 24, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No one could ever make me feel this way. Thats why it is killing me. It is more than my poor heart should know. I remember each time I cry. Nothing ever stays the same. I dream of lovers past. I lost the only one I love. I'm broken hearted. Lifes not over. I could start again. I need to get over. This broken heart feeling tearing me apart. I listen to all advise. I thought it would last forever. I thought she would be with me for all time. I don't want to be alone again. It's a hurting thing. My life isn't over. I'm only brokenhearted. It's all good. Learned something from the trip. You can't get unless you give, you can't recieve unless you leave your comfort zone.

    I saw her friend yesterday. I put in my words and told her to say.. I need her in my life. I want her in my life. I need her back. Now.

    Love is life.. :love: Life is love.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww this is so nice
    it touch me nice hodee really nice...
     
  3. URGelus

    URGelus Active Member MEMBER

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    This was a tyte piece! Very sweet!

    Scribe On

    URGelus
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin u here tyte scribe
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww how beautiful. nice flow.
     
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