Black Poetry : broken heart

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  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BROKEN HEART


    My eyes are now rung dry,
    and no matter how hard I try,
    I cant seem to cry.

    My hearts gone numb,
    I’ve been hurt so many times I cant tell where it comes from,
    what once was could never be again,
    for I am sure that this broken heart you cannot mend,
    over and over
    time after time,
    my feelings I’ve set aside.
    Stared you in your face and watched you lie.

    just like the others,
    you’ve missed your chance,
    now I have no time for unfaithful romance,

    I loved you once,
    but I will never love you again,
    for I am sure that this broken heart you cannot mend. :happens:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwww!!!!
    the emotion running high
    flow on
     
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    I felt the ache in this emotively written piece. Somehow we do eventually get beyond the pain. Flow on.
     
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    Nice flow from the heart (no pun intended). Keep scribing and I'll keep reading.

    peace
    your brother blak
     
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    Felt this before then I decided, once it's over, it's over. Can't return 4 seconds.

    Nice piece.
     
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    mmm...this packed a powerful punch of unavoidable emotion
    the kind that mirrors your own past experiences...

    Very well written with great rhythm and impact...

    Sage
     
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    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx

    glad to know u like it. i figured everyone could relate to it in sum way!!!!"where do broken hearts go, can they find their way home?"
     
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    They go wherever you send it, and that's a natural fact. If you want to hold on to a broken heart, it's your's for as long as you want it. A broken heart will nest at home...as long as you feed it.
    wonderful write up, and a word to the wise:
    "Should your heart ever break...
    ...DO NOT, entertain it" ...for misery loves company.
     
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