Black Poetry : Broken Heart Spell

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Back and forth I go
    Wondering why
    How something so right
    Can go so wrong

    Tracing the dark
    Trying to see light
    Holding on with all my might
    No love vibe flows through my pen
    For I am lost in this bad wind
    A storm picked me up
    And took me away
    My pen bleeds pieces of a broken heart
    Feeling….
    Like I made it to members only
    And Bobby Bland is no longer the founder
    For it’s my private party
    A pity call you can say

    My heart cries out
    My soul hides
    As my spirit dies
    My lungs coated in dark smoke
    As I try to gasp for breath
    I don’t even know how
    We lost the groove

    From the distance
    Lets straighten it out

    I can’t live like this any longer
    For I can’t, feel my being
    As if I am misplaced in this world

    Funny how our love is there
    But we can’t seem to connect
    Like we use to be

    My tears flow
    ….like the lost river of the Nile
    Hoping we can make it through this storm
    That was created by man

    Back and forth I go
    Wondering why
    How something so right
    Can go so wrong


    Chapter 3
    One Woman’s Heart
    By An Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling dis one what seem so right yet feel so bad
    is what is fed to the heart deep in da soul and it
    sometime make ya wanna go cold and fold take a
    stroll or speak out bold ......sometime a broken heart
    spell relief to the mental dis was tyte and well felt ....
     
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    Baby, that "love-slump" won't last :playball:

    Angel, you got GAME!!! :hi:
     
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    thanks for the love...Rich and 1Poet

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    most welcome a heart do mend in faith .....
     
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    Yes indeed.......
     
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    Great flow MzBlk

    " Funny how our love is there
    But we can’t seem to connect
    Like we use to be "

    This line brought my reading to a halt. It was only a second, but it seemed like a long time. It was enough I noticed the pause.

    Baby I can no longer see
    the things that we used to do.
    I can't do those things
    with anyone else
    I can do with you.

    So I wonder why go on living,
    but to give up now means
    not being there
    if things were to change.

    So where ever you are.
    Know this.

    My heart is there.
    Because I feel the hole in my chest.

    Know that my eyes are
    wondering into crowds.

    Hoping I catch a glimpse
    of you again.

    I hope if we meet again.
    I can find the words to say
    that will tell you these things.

    I won't beg you.
    I am honestly going
    to let you know.

    I miss you so. :luvu:

    A memo:
    Please attach this to
    the broken heart spell.

    So If you come across my love.
    Leave it there where my love is.
     
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    peace,

    nice scribe poet, keep ya head up!!
     
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