Black Poetry : broken habits?

[brotherman]

Title tho' tenative, could be "broken habit"

I feel the sense of dismay, unappreciated flight into a self reckoning moment where questioning of ones deeds are not balanced with ones reciepts. A very clever abstractness to alturistic characterization as well as poetic appeal to reveal the expectation never asked for...directly. Ya' know?

 

[j'hiah]

i'll call it "creature of habit" (of course)..

but the piece itself is toooo tyte.
i undastand it's a habit you have queen.

 

[mizdee2002]

brother,

there is a state of contradiction in which, i as a black woman, sometimes find myself..thank u for appreciating the depth of my journey...


your friend
dee

 

[mizdee2002]

j'hiah,

thanx for understanding where i be....

much luv,
dee

 

[shaz]

I liked this very much