Black Poetry : Broken For A Moment

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lilcherry76, Nov 3, 2003.

  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you think that after your hearts' been broken,
    that you can never love again.
    and that no matter how hard you try to play life's game,
    that you never win.
    but that ain't true and i'll tell you why,
    bcuz love don't work like that.
    and despite all of your short comings,
    someone will always love you back.
    bcuz you're man enough,
    or woman--as the case might be.
    to realize what went wrong,
    whether she was the problem-------or he.
    bcuz you know that love is just a big swirl of emotions,
    pain and joy----all together mixed.
    and you know that the only reason why things get broken,
    is bcuz they weren't properly fixed.
    so don't close your heart,
    to knocks-------that appear at its door.
    for all we know,
    the person knocking could have been hurt before.
    and their hoping that the person on the other side,
    will understand and know what to say.
    see bcuz everyone's been broken before,
    but we don't stay that way......... :grouphug:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling the wisdom
    in your flow
    very nice
    Peace
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow here...feelin da vibe ..

    :angel1:
     
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    Very nice, positive flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed ya pen on point nice drop of truth
     
  6. Jelani_Dalmar

    Jelani_Dalmar Active Member MEMBER

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    Soooooooo true

    I know for awhile I felt like this, not wanting to hear nothing from a female about relationships...I am feelin this
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVED THIS!

    SNAP!SNAP! AND A HAND CLAP!


    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    Im over her crying lilcherry...this comes at the right time for me:heart: thank you for writing this down when i don't have the strength to anymore...
     
  9. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey ya'll thanks for the love---and SwtT it's only bound to get better cuz life only gets better unless the worse is sitting on your shoulders. preciate the love again ya'll thanx.........
     
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    im telling you ,you read me from a to z. this is my story for real . keep flowing :thanks:
     
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