Black Poetry : Bring Me Your Dreams

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Mar 20, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drift your essence secretly away as you slowly
    slumber into my “always always”
    land of thoughts and visions pure

    Be mindful to bring me your dreams of love
    that you fantasize about as you quietly turn
    “Zs” into relaxing “you and I” sleep

    Eyelids flicker and flutter as “forty one”
    winks take you there
    There where you want to be for all eternity
    when you dare to dream
    Imagine for a moment lovers together dreaming
    and softly caressing all their cares away

    Rest your head and your burdens on my strong
    but still lucent shoulder
    Visualize dreamscapes of me that are not yet
    meant to be interpreted as real

    See just enough of my black man's silhouette to
    separate my awakened fact from your napping fiction

    Sweet emotions intertwine with my alluring mental
    to resonate your quiescent cerebral flow
    Creating in your mind’s eye a lasting
    but abstract affliction to soothe hearts as dreamers do

    Join with me in an "any"time dreamer’s sojourn into
    mesmerized forever bliss

    Smile ever so slightly to reach the level of my love’s comfort
    Can you fall as deeply into my love as your heart will allow?
    Say the words that make my presence desired in your dreams

    With my own eyes closed, I powerfully inhale your sleeping spirit
    The apex of your self-contained fantasy-filled REM abode is reached
    Quixotic realisms of love intermingled by the many thoughts of us

    My heart's soul loves when you bring your dreams to me…
     
  2. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amazing hunnie...i love ur work
     
  3. nubianlover

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    all dem ladies bout to drop it
    on u ......dreams of u know
    look out GQ...
     
  4. Destee

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    very nice GQ

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

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    <<< this is me... & i can't breathe dammit!!

    gq...

    i read this earlier & had
    to leave it & come back...
    you know what you do to me
    we've been thru this time
    & time again!!... as usual--
    it was exquisite!
    this could be a response to
    my "While You Were Sleeping"

    keep givin' it to us baby! ;)

    Peace...
    Sunshyne~
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well GA-Sun...

    Maybe it is in response indirectly...I'll tell ya about it when ya wake me from our dream!!! ;)

    L&R
    GQ
     
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    Flow Flow On

    A nice piece of warmth and work--touching to the soul--Amun-ra
     
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    WOW...I AM SPEECHLESS!
     
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    wooooooweeeee! Q bout to melt the place
     
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