Black Poetry : Bring Me Back To Life...To Love (Silent Eternities)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by raheem, Oct 10, 2001.

  1. raheem

    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ....know that inside the silent
    eternities in between
    our 2 hearts beating....

    I live a thousand lifetimes...

    ...and know that my pensive moods
    and what you call. my "awful broods"

    I barely endure outside
    your embrace

    your arms~my refuge
    my resting place

    ...and know

    as I stand before you
    scarely able to catch my breath

    I offer you my unworthiness with nothing left

    except the hope that you
    will hold me again...

    bring me back to life

    inside the silent eternities
    in between
    our 2 hearts beating


    r
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    raheem....


    EVERY tyme i read you... my heart aches.

    SunShyne~
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: raheem....


    :love: Sounds like a someone who knows the value of love.
    And I sigh........and wipe a tear from my eye!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u live a thousand life tymes

    the motion of true acts of love......flow on!
     
  5. JNubian

    JNubian Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bro. Raheem:
    I'm struggling to find the right words for this. I can't. I moved.
    Excellent!
    JNubian
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to be so completely loved/in love..to share your heart with another in such complete surrender..must be quite simply the most wonderful of feelings...

    these words are beautiful....

    K
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    raheem, the flow on this piece is just lovely. very well written, dear friend.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    unique and excellent are understatements..

    nfinite
    jh.
     
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