Black Poetry : Bring it with you when you come.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skuderjaymes, Oct 2, 2013.

  1. skuderjaymes

    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    Don't know where you are,
    who you with,
    nor what you done;

    But my loving darling..
    bring it with you,
    when you come.
     
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    James,

    This piece came to my ears as a song, replete with music.
    Especially like, "But my loving darling.."
    because the narrator is acknowledging the woman's ability to love instead of his own.
    Pretty little thing. Enjoyed the read.

    (smile)