Black Poetry : Bright Lights - Dim Lights

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 3, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bright lights always flashing
    No mystery
    No question about what you see
    Putting it all out there
    "Hey look at me"

    Dim lights draw one closer
    Intrigue
    Who could she be
    There must be more for me to see

    Bright lights just like all the rest
    Shake and shimmy
    No internal and spiritual test
    No flavor or magic
    Make any old guess

    Dim lights have a ceretain hue
    Sweetly accenting the soul in you
    Leaving just enough shadow of a doubt
    For one to come inside
    Seeing what you're really all about

    BE
    (c) 2000
     
  2. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep the flow, BE

    i'll be waiting, lights on dim...

    dee
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't screem
    whisper!

    well spoken poet
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ah Yea!!

    I feeling this Heartbeat!!
    Keep the flo!
     
  5. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really tho'!!!! Can it all be so simple? Thanks for the underlining perspective -that could be taught in sociology 101, no doubt. But it deserves it's own school of thought.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man dis one hittin' on all cylinders no mystery ! flow head BE.........
     
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