Quiet Poetry Lounge : Bright Lights - Dim Lights

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jun 30, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bright lights always flashing
    No mystery
    No question about what you see
    Putting it all out there
    "Hey look at me"

    Dim lights draw one closer
    Intrigue
    Who could she be?
    There must be more for me to see

    Bright lights just like all the rest
    Shake and shimmy
    No internal, spiritual test
    No flavor or magic
    Make any old guess

    Dim lights have a certain hue
    Sweetly accenting the soul in you
    Leaving just enough shadow of a doubt
    For one to come inside
    Seeing what you're really all about

    BE
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DAYUMM!! BE..........

    THE LIGHT OF POINT
    IS FO SHO AS IT DEM
    TO PERFECTION
    WOW!!
    MAN WHAT U CAN DO WIT WORDS
    GO POET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MO MO MO !!!BE.......:toast:
     
  3. DeJay

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    FO SHO

    I AGREE WITH MY BOY RICH I THINK THAT GOOOD DOGG:toast:
     
  4. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice

    Description....excellent perception. I enjoyed the flow....
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Beat

    i cannot lie
    i felt your flow, hea

    keep the flow
     
  6. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea...

    now I really liked this one!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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