Black Poetry : Brick Wall.....BROKEN!

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  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hate the fact that I fall more in love with you everyday
    I cant stand the thought of not being able to see your face
    I don’t want it to be your touch that my body craves
    and do I have to accept that my heart wants to love you always
    why is it that your all the thought that my mind can take



    I cant deal with this feeling
    the thought of you leaves me staring at the ceiling
    and if my heart breaks I don’t think its capable of healing
    don’t you realize that its my trust that your stealing



    you invade my mind
    and you tell me all the secrets that u find
    from you there so hard to hide
    you make it so impossible to lie
    because when u talk to me you stare me in the eyes



    but yet its so easy to give you my mind body and soul
    at night its you that I wanna hold
    with you my heart is comfortable
    to me your love is worth so much more then gold
    your attention makes me vulnerable


    I don’t have to tell you that I love you because you can see it in me
    I don’t have to tell you I love you because you can feel it
    it scares me though......I didn’t think I could love this hard
    you made me do something I thought I could never do......
    “let down my guard”
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed i can relate big time
    when da Guards go down and love rise up
    it opens doors untoched before for breakage.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Letting down our guard makes us feel so vulnerable, so open for possible attack. But can we truly love any other way? Such a wonderful way you posed this piece. Great to read you again.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man i feel ya on this piece truly. flo on poet.:blowkiss:
     
  5. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks im glad u liked my flow its a true situation
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    guttapoet:
    I LUV THIS PIECE!!!!
    I feel what your sayin...each and every word.
    When a man can take you to your truest form
    of a woman. D***!!!
    Very, very,nicely expressed:welldone:

    Much luv
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Sounds like Love caught you slippin'! lol j/k



    Just when you thought you wuz safe.......BAM!




    Enjoyed this, GUTTA.


    And......... :birthday:
     
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