Black Poetry : breeze

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  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for DL

    laying on a boulder
    in a plush green pasture
    body pressed against the sun
    butterflies tattooed on the sky
    turtles swimming in the pond
    water rushing over rocks
    honey dripping from their combs
    rabbits jumping through the fence
    birds chirping in their nests
    lady bug on my thigh
    flowers bending in the breeze
    peaches falling from their trees
    grapes dangling from their vines
    honeysuckle claims the air
    soft smile on my lips
    only you on my mind
     
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    A fine, fitting tribute.
     
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    Thank you, precious. I am grateful for your support.

    (smile)
     
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    nature setting the mood for life...the ambiance is always breathtaking. you gotta love it.:)

    NICEly done.
     
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    Yes indeed, my precious friend. Yes indeed.

    THANK you.

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As da season change so do life that makes it so beautiful this was well felt
     
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    My most precious Brother Poet $$RICH$$,

    Thank you. I love when you can feel one of my pieces.

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    Wow....Now I could see myself in my lawn chair with a nice cool glass of wine sitting in the middle of the grass experiencing this. Great piece.
     
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    Thank you kindly, Poet MsVeraisblessed. May I join you in the middle of the grass? Only, I'll have a glass of iced tea, instead.

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    Of course you can..:lol:
     
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