Black Poetry : Breeze

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What shall I call this cool breeze
    that seeped in under my door,
    swirled around my body
    and encircled my core?
    This gust of life
    transferred into me
    an extra zest for living
    a spirit set free
    A breath of fresh air
    so crisp and pure
    as you exhale I inhale
    this life force that's sure...
    to endure
    all other ill winds that
    manage to infiltrate
    This breeze that soothes me
    is the blessing of fate
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's da bliss
    of my mix
    the breeze that
    make u twitch
    to da core
    when i slide under
    da door i'm da
    swift gentle breeze
    the kind u feel
    and say ahhhh!
    i'm pleased
    can u feel me now !!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It seems
    you know
    about the gentle
    breeze's flow
    And how this wind
    creeps under the door
    Wrapping me in a bliss
    that blankets my core
    Deeply I sigh
    I can feel you now

    Thank you Rich for the sweet flow
     
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    T'is but a whiff of what life's made of ~

    Keep feeling life.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I shall 1poet, I shall. Thank you kindly brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed watz i do
    because i am the
    breeze that flow
    the air that circle
    between ya thighs
    the gentle touch
    upon ya face i am
    what da inner core
    trace can u feel me now !

    most welcome dear........
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    nice watz...very nice...
     
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    this breeze left the frog at eaze
     
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    Sodwn2earth Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed the way your words flowed together to make an enticing write. I liked very much.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling the breeze in all its intensity Rich, thank you again.
    Appreciated deepy, thank you poet.
    Glad this left you with a peaceful feeling Froggy1, thank you.
    Thank you Sodwn2earth for letting me know you enjoyed this vibe.
     
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