Black Poetry : Breathless

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by abstract219, May 31, 2006.

  1. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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  2. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Music to my ears... i'm being naughty today...


    Maestro
    you are my muze
    my accelerando
    signaling me to finish
    or urging me to start
    your timbre vividly differs
    from any before you
    we don't need sheet music
    we simply play what we feel

    adagio or allegro
    i'm your tempo to control
    your cleft is never in dissonance
    never drone, sharp, or flat
    you play me like i play my sax
    easily yet passionately

    our intrevals are continuous maestro
    our musicology will live on everytime
    our voice, your staff, and my bars
    come together to form the melody of us
    we make beautiful music
    .
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a maze and picture painted as i vision into the glist becoming breathless..........awesome scribe right here poet !
     
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    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow.

    Love the scribe, breathing irregular, and daaaaayyyyymmmmmmm what a reply there.

    Making beautiful music together, that deserves a post all it's own...... I love the soul in this thread. I'm sitting here trying to gain inspiration for a poetic reply, but I guess I'm breathless and out of words. Respect, poet.

    Infrequently Soulful,
    Archival
     
  5. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i see my sis up there doing her thing now who need the nickel missy. love the flo poet keep up the good work.
     
  6. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    wow....I think the response piece was more musical...better than the original....lol

    thank you ifyoucome...we are kindred spirits indeed....love the musicological reply....i understood clearly

    and thank you all for your much appreciated responses....
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whooo, you got me breathless...much respect poet! I love your work, keep flowin.
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *exhales*

    Relax
    Relate
    Release
    :spinstar:
     
  9. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wrote a reply... titled "The Reply"

    learn to read between the lines man...lol... or i'm :bye:

    *smh*
     
  10. ILL

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    Hot stuff....right here.
     
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