Black Poetry : BREATHLESS BEAUTY WITHIN

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Shall i just , just see u about
    or should i definitely see u
    the mild and cloudy climate
    from which i came beholds me
    has left me wit gentle melancholy

    Secret impressions wit passionate warmth
    has da generous cascading beauty
    as of da sun bronzing yo brow , captivated
    given u light i so see deep inside

    The ardour of your glance
    da violent clasp of yo arms
    da fervour of ya desires temptest me
    breathlessly

    I cannot better express nor explain
    what i feel or felt ta better what i'm sayin
    yet hear da song of melodies ye heart sang
    forth art my beloveth , behold me i stand
    at da helmz of ya core

    Ya unknown heart seem to pass into my bosom
    there dwell forever i carry thee while mines i pass
    is translated into yours has me again breathless
    tis da very first dawn of human love burstin upon
    da icy night of thy spirits clashing

    I shall return upon my slumbering maze and return
    upon u as i gasp my breath inside ya beauty

    pt.II WHEN I AWAKEN !

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    Copyrights (c) 2007 Da $R

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    Flowed like a gentle breeze. This was a serene piece.
     
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    Thank u sista watz fo da luv .........
     
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    poet

    this was some real ish right here man

    i'm impressed
     
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    big thankz brother .......so'ja
     
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