Black Poetry : Breathing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 29, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Breathe in all that there is
    Breathe out some of what is wrong
    Some of what is right
    Remaining particles of life circulate
    Through you
    About you
    You become part of the atmosphere
    No one can escape
    As long as you breathe

    BE
     
  2. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *exhaling* .......*inhaling*
    Nice piece!
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  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    poet poet poet
    deep deep deep

    360 degrees
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEARTBEAT .........INDEED ......JUST BREATH AGAIN !!!
    NICE FLOW POET.
     
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