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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by danni0518, Aug 1, 2006.

  1. danni0518

    danni0518 New Member MEMBER

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    Hard for me to breathe
    Needing
    Missing You
    And Your warmth
    Love
    Affection
    Where are You
    What happened
    Have I lost yet again
    Been winning for the longest
    Guess my luck
    Changed
    I guess
    Amazing
    How Your essence remains
    Intriguing
    How I continue thinking of You
    Not trying
    Unwilling
    Just don’t **** wanna
    Give up
    So much time,
    Effort,
    Potential
    So much potential
    Losing my mind
    Already lost my heart
    No sleep
    Losing weight
    You win some
    Lose others,
    Which did I do
    I had a plan
    They say black folks aren’t too good with plans
    I’d have to agree
    Am I a fool because
    I am not willing to lose
    Again
    Same scenario, different person
    Is it,
    Naw, it couldn’t be
    Me
    Alone, struggling
    This wasn’t part of the plan
    Too determined not to win
    This game
    Too stubborn to
    Listen
    To my head
    Heart doesn’t matter
    Couldn’t, shouldn’t matter
    Can’t make decisions
    Unable to think
    Straight
    I believe
    In love
    Happily ever after
    I still believe
    In us
    But
    It’s just so **** hard for me to breathe
    So
    Hard
    To
    Breathe
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome danni0518

    welcome to destee.com quiet flowz
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love


    felt every drop of this piece tyte flow again welcome within
    ya kin now so flow head on ! danni0518

    :new: :wave:
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful flow I love how you wrote it just as if the feeling was still rising in you it gives the piece new life and it reads as if I can hear you saying it. it a refreshing taleent and I hope to hear more from you.
     
  4. danni0518

    danni0518 New Member MEMBER

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    Thanx for the love. I'm just becoming able to vent and it feels good to know that my feelings are well comprehended.:coffee:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Danni...
    Welcome to our home, relax, enjoy..cause it's your home too.
    I enjoyed reading and can very well relate...
    thanks for sharing a part of your soul with us.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    danni:
    I really luv this piece. I thought I was
    the only one that ever felt this way.
    Nice to know Im not alone.:)
    Awesone write. Keep it flowing sista

    Much luv
     
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