Black Poetry : Breathe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by phenomenalwoman, Feb 16, 2004.

  1. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Breathe brotha breathe
    Release the tension
    That’s stressing your mind
    Breathe
    You don’t have to bare the weight of the world
    On your shoulders alone
    I’m here
    Let me bare the weight with you
    Breathe
    I will be your other half
    I want to make you whole
    Let me in to your heart
    Let me in to your soul
    Breathe
    I will make you dinner
    At the end of a hard day
    Give you a massage
    To rub the stress away
    Run a bath
    For you and I to share
    Breathe brotha breathe
    You shouldn’t have a care
    Let me lead you
    To our bed
    Release the tension
    There’s no more to be said
    Breathe
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'm breathing
    i'm breathing
    freely coz u came openly
    to my aid .....................
    feeling dis tyte drop !
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey I think any brotha would appreciate this from a sista, I liked the way you posed this.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes the drop
    tight scribing indeed
    flow on.....
     
  5. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich, watz and mzblkangel for commenting. glad you liked it
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was phenomenal...every blak man should have a woman like this, every blak woman should have a man that reciprocates. thsi spoke to the true unity of "us". Keep doing the dang thang.

    10

    blak
     
  7. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love blak
     
  8. FattDaddy2k3

    FattDaddy2k3 Member MEMBER

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    Great Job Phenomenal...
    I been looking for that...
    Would love to have that woman...
    It's tight...keep it up! :book:
     
  9. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovely, poetic
    my lungs loved the concept
    tru poetry


    One-l
     
  10. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my sista this was so lovely makes me wanna cry :)
    our brothas need to hear it more :)
    props my sista props
     
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