Black Poetry : Breathe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Oct 17, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    i'm sitting here
    don't know what to do
    cause i am so
    in love with you

    i can't move up
    i can't move down
    sometimes i cry
    and don't know why

    i wish we could
    be like it was
    fun in the summer
    the two of us

    but fall is come
    and winter too
    and i am still
    in love with you

    what did i do
    to make things wrong
    give me a chance
    to make it right

    your my last hope
    for happiness
    grab you mop
    lets clean this mess

    can't u see
    i am you
    you are me
    we both dig

    extremes

    breathe, sweetie breathe
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    emotional flow...
     
  3. Khasm13

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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very emotional more...you poured it out with this:)
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love is powerful
    feelin all the emotions flow here tyte
     
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