Quiet Poetry Lounge : Breathe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Applejacque, Mar 7, 2003.

  1. Applejacque

    Applejacque Member MEMBER

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    You've fallen unconscious
    under the curse that left you heartbroken
    and you've slumbered alone
    for a lonely, long time

    To come out of this
    love lorn coma,
    a man must come unto you
    and administer the antidote

    His lips should act as the syringe
    with the vial filled with kisses
    that not only awakens you from your sleep
    but allows you to finally

    Live Again
    Love Again
    Breathe,.......

    Others have come before me
    Viewed your helpless state
    only to turn away
    Looking for the instant

    New and improved
    Ready-made
    Window-dressed mannequin
    of perfection

    I on the other hand
    will take you as you are
    Yours is a love worth saving
    and when all is said and done, you can

    Live Again
    Love Again
    Breathe,.......

    I must admit
    that when I first laid eyes on you
    asleep, but not at peace
    I wanted more than just to love you

    Wanting more than to MAKE love to you
    and much more than the gentle touch of your form
    I wanted to experience you Tantric
    taking in your sweet smelling savor in my nostrils

    It seeps through the pores of your fair skin
    around the curvicatures of your vast hills and valleys
    unto the depths of your cavern of wonder
    I want so much for you to

    Live Again
    Love Again
    Breathe,.......

    I feel the warmth of your love
    radiating like sunbeams on my face
    as I continue my Tantric technique
    touching the very essence of you

    without physically making skin contact
    it seems like your body is responding
    by the subtle twitching that could go unnoticed
    to someone who couldn't catch what signals you were throwing

    as if your body was yearning for more
    than being taken for a quick moment of pleasure
    filled with fleeting casual lust
    that was part of the poison that left you wanting to

    Live Again
    Love Again
    Breathe,.......

    My lips pressed against yours
    ever so softly, but intensely
    So much so, that it breathed the breath of life
    unto the vacant recesses of your love

    I did not want my lips to part from yours
    as you embraced me and returned my kiss
    with equal, if not more, passion than mine
    as tears fell from our eyes that met

    and washed away each other's pain
    Our intertwined tears ran down our faces and fell to your bosoms
    I knew then that you would never
    need to exhale. for you can now

    Live

    Again

    Love

    Again

    ,.......Breathe :love:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was very moving piece had me breathing let ya pen run ink !
     
  3. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Live again, Love again? Wow...I've learned to live, still working on the love thing. " a man must come unto you and administer the antidote" ....ain't that the truth....*laughing*
     
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